Fighting for women
Can be pretty burdensome
When men don’t support
A crowded blue line
Whizzing madly on the road
Has been banned today
Watching you today
My heart does a somersault
I am deep in love
Waves crashing at us
As we sit down at the beach
Building a castle
Quilts and hot coffee
Helps us throughout winter days
As we wait for spring
Looking for the stars
At the terrace in the night
Pitch black sky stare back
5 comments:
know your words and thoughts,
love to play with them,
nice game to bring out creativity!
err!! i guess u got wat i mean..!(xcuse me) tryg first time my hand on haikus!!
Good try for first time
i know you have it in you
never stop trying!!!!:)
ps- creativity has has 5 syllabuls.. thus ur lst line has 11 syllabuls!;)
sheesh!!
i am out of words..
THIS IS GOOD!!
I liked the last 3 Haikus
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